Comments by River Lily
- ""Never would the stars above die in astral rain." Gorgeous line..I love this. A beautiful heartfelt tribute. I'm sure your brother would be proud."
Posted by River Lily on "-Your Strength-" by sTr8-jAcKeT
- "Very deep and nostalgic feeling. Loved the rhyme scheme..the overall feeling of this piece ..leaves a slight feeling of missing days past and gentle melancholy. Nicely done. :)"
Posted by River Lily on "-Beyond The Past-" by sTr8-jAcKeT
