Comments by TropicalSnowstorm
- ""The sunspots on my heart
casting their shadows
Regrets from journeys I've taken
back when I could take them" - I especially loved that stanza. Great piece! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Sunspots on my Heart" by Lab Rat
- "Holy crap, this was awesome! I like the repeated refrain of the boy with the bad temper...I like the memory of seeking shelter, both in and with innocence...I especially like the implied fork in the road where you seek to not join in this "legacy" of behavior. The way it was written, with the stops and starts, mirrored the flashes of memories. This is a real masterpiece! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Boys, and bad behavior" by Lab Rat
