Comments by Malcholm Dark
- "A good tale, told well... an enjoyable read... check a couple of lines... loose the arrow, not lose... "you start pack your things"... forgot something there.... thanks for the write"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Arrow of love" by draco5445
- "Good read, I like.... If you use 'I' at the beginning of a line, use it in the middle...check your 4th line.... thanks for the write "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Unknown Love" by draco5445
