Comments by Malcholm Dark

  • "Very nice X, TVs are the hell we've made for ourselves... I like the part about church... I was in a church once that had a very expensive system that put them in every one's TV... For jesus you know, Amen and send us money... a real travesty... Thanks for bringing it all out in your piece... the last verse you wrote, "think it for you..."... maybe you meant, think for you boxes... a cool line... write on "
    Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Digitalized Me" by theXkevorkian
  • "well written and different, thank-you... you forgot the box in the mind, where we go and hide away.. Now I'm off to listen to alice in chains, man in a box...lol thanks"
    Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Boxes" by theXkevorkian
  • "A fine heart-felt piece. Well crafted, as is all your work... 'we collapsed in the exhaustion of heart spilled emenants'... A perfect, beautiful line. Thanks. "
    Posted by Malcholm Dark on "The Inaffectionate :" by theXkevorkian
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