Comments by Malcholm Dark
- "Cool imagery, still need to use your spell checker... good emotional content... you need to use a bit more punctuation, especially when someone is speaking... nice piece, write on "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "The new whale. part 2" by Joey
- "Nice retell of Moby Dick, you should really run this through the spell checker, or at the very least re-read several times after you have posted... nice imagery, thanks for sharing"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "The new whale Part 1" by Joey
