Comments by ubiquitoussoul

"The ending .. what a laugh. .. like a foreign language.. all confused..crashlanded another world... sex left you speechless.."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "She Fucked Me and Left" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"This big dark nightmare it seems.. where nothing actually weighted..real.. everything seems to be moving in slow motion..backwards..contradictions in here used very well .. unique thought to pen.."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Nihil Obstat" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"swing on a swing..between sky and ground.. such a high thing..looks from below..sings"
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Nil Desperandum #3" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"so erogenous..what a rapture..like a flick of the lighter..the lightning strike of nerves..of her..warm indeed.."
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Truth" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Affirmation agreed..Sweet man.. have a sick(not overly) birthday..Awesome devour those years with awesome health!"
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "On the Occasion of the 30th Anniversary of My Birth " by Crush_With_Eyeliner

""disguised as reward." your short poetry I've seen speaks more than the poems who exaggerate .. the viswions of a metallic endeavour .. written like a pill you can swallow"
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Anticipation" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"the word for this is elegant..imagery worded grand in quantity small..sounds effortlessly well expressed.. "
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "To Covet" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Dead are dead many ways,, I liked this "
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Grocer of Despair" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"So awesome man.. Love the texture and color of the sky.. Like aluminum ..metal like the things we use ..the sun.. Now we enjoy the advancements of technology,. We can be in a microwave oven and be oblivious .. Cancer phones .. Most people have annual to life contracts with those..much like cancer sticks.. Well expressed.. It was funny how it all played out ..the ending close it all up well.. A natural beach next to the burning minds under unnatural skies.?"
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "We Fought for Seville-Orange" by Crush_With_Eyeliner

"Interesting statement .. Something to ponder on.. That which will destroy us.. The power of words in the air. Strain from the lips to the simplest form ..chopped to fragments .. Something so simple..so complicated. Beautifully written .. The way it reads ..slips off my sober tongue"
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Antithetical Deconstruction" by Crush_With_Eyeliner