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She Fucked Me and Left
By Crush_With_Eyeliner
She
fucked me
and left
at midday.
She left me
asleep;
spent
and majestic.
Spread across
my sheets
in a foreign
language.
I'm thinking
of giving
her
a key.
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Copyright 2011 Crush_With_Eyeliner
Published on Saturday, April 9, 2011.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "She Fucked Me and Left"
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On Sunday, October 11, 2015, Sasha_Revengy
(46)
wrote:
aha.. well then, short and straight to the point :)
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On Wednesday, December 26, 2012, past tense
(16) wrote:
this turns on a dime so quickly, so eloquently.. and yet remains open to interpretation in its starkness.
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On Thursday, May 5, 2011, vengeance23
(5) wrote:
great love nights. Or afternoons like that!
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On Friday, April 15, 2011, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Magic. Absolute magic.
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A former member wrote:
nice write im realy sorry
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A former member wrote:
Wanting to be used... that's what I drew from this. Abrupt and naked. This is a great piece.
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On Saturday, April 9, 2011, Doomy_One
(3) wrote:
You leave the reader just as stunned as the subject is. "I'm thinking of giving her a key" kills me. She will destroy you...
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A former member wrote:
That's rough. I really liked this.
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A former member wrote:
Abrupt and oh so telling as always. Some of your poems are Bierce-like...short, brutal & packed with power in a small frame, rarely taking prisoners. This one has an uplifting ending...sort of hopeful. As always, love seeing you post...
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A former member wrote:
im thinking of giving her a key...lol
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On Saturday, April 9, 2011, ubiquitoussoul
(343) wrote:
The ending .. what a laugh. .. like a foreign language.. all confused..crashlanded another world... sex left you speechless..
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