Comments by Kaleidoscope_Heart
- "This is an unusual style, but in a good way. That's interesting, because usually comparing a love to a rose is cliche but here it is not. The last two lines are lovely and very relatable, which contrast to the complex lines before them. The last line especially was great; it reflects how language will fail us everytime when w wish to convey our thoughts and feelings (especialy in english!) But ironically, we still try everytime :)"
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "The Flower of Beyond" by palenoble
- "Clever. Random Bullshit Generator. I can relate to the feeling... of smelling winter, and frost. ( I don't ice skate but I ski :) )You feel apart from others, but closer to nature and your own senses. Anyway this was beautifully written, it endulges the senses. "
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "Thin ice" by palenoble
- "Quite profound. The rage is firey and lucid. I love your meter and scheme. And the reference to donald duck made me grin. - Welcome to DP"
Posted by Kaleidoscope_Heart on "F*ck you" by palenoble
