Comments by carlosjackal
- "Brilliant. That last line ends things perfectly like a sad punch line but at the same time I'm intrigued to know how this would have panned out if added to, or maybe that you haven't is entirely the point."
Posted by carlosjackal on "A Dimly lit Carnival Ride" by AshtrayDirt
- "Crazy, surrealist imagery and a cracking title - Fear not, this was more than just a 'rant', this was beautifully exorcised poetry :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "sunfire city" by AshtrayDirt
