Comments by Ghost One

  • "yeah i never really care to write in rythm, but i thought i'd try and it sounded great while i was writing it, but like i said after i re-read it the flow and rythm was just all shot to hell. "
    Posted by Ghost One on "Inspired by a shooting star." by Ghost One
  • "i do so apreciate comments... good or bad. they help me criticiz myself. lol and do mean alot to me. so please comment away... pretty please? lol ok sorry i'm not gonna beg for comments... "
    Posted by Ghost One on "Ode To Amanda" by Ghost One
  • "i have to wonder if those eyse will be filled with tears... as mine are... if those eyes grace these feeble words... i am striken and no cure, but her penetrating gaze, exsists for me... :("
    Posted by Ghost One on "Eyes" by Ghost One
  • "yeah i spose it was a cop out... i just had to write something... i've been having trouble getting my feelings and thoughts to paper as of late. and just couldn't stand it anymore. i'm sorry if you felt it was a waste of your time. :("
    Posted by Ghost One on "..." by Ghost One
  • "yes you are right it WAS pointless. but i am happy to have wasted a few meager minutes of your pitiful exsitences. thank you for taking the time to domment though, bad comments still please me. not like i'm even proud of this work, but i wrote it, and wha"
    Posted by Ghost One on "Ha! I am a moron!!" by Ghost One
  • "yes i am commenting on my own work. Probably the only one daring enough to do so. I know the author personally, and yes he is crazy... or an idiot... havn't decided which yet. Besides is it against the law to be disgusted with yerself?"
    Posted by Ghost One on "Ha! I am a moron!!" by Ghost One
  • "thank you for the welcome... i am very enthusiastic about being accepted. and look forward to compose many more. "
    Posted by Ghost One on "Love As A Flower" by Ghost One
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