Comments by The Zebra Warrior
- "this is gut wrenching ...at first quite misleading in it's simple diction and basic stanza arrangement, a forcible speed up like a rolerocaster as the poem then unfolds and the story is told..aargh, violence to woman, i feel sick."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Susan Caroline Ray" by l mo
- "that nightmare that persists..its a wrencher to read but perhaps you have reached some better ground through it..I dont know..I hope."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Eternity of Scars" by l mo
- "I really like the brevity of language that takes the message of the poem straight ot the heart and lets the fellings flow in a kind of rhymthic questioning.Very nice my friend."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Certain Uncertainty" by l mo
