"good work... "I'm talking to you..." to a dead person... "I'll be with you soon..." the final meeting place... spooky write" Posted by TheBardOfBlasphemy on "I'll Be With You Soon" by l mo
"great stuff... once again a rhyming story... nice ideas... i have shared this sentiment many times..." Posted by TheBardOfBlasphemy on "Soul Stealer" by l mo
"that's really harsh i hope things get better if it's true" Posted by TheBardOfBlasphemy on "Hurt" by l mo
"lol. not bad. with more patience and work this could've been a longer rhyming story about a hunter hunted situation with more gore and surprises. " Posted by TheBardOfBlasphemy on "Mercenary" by l mo
