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  • "Awesome use of personification! I loved this! We have so many of these faults that make us a whole....what would we be if we killed them off one by one? Thanks for the thought provoking piece."
    Posted by natalie on "Endless Restoration " by TropicalSnowstorm
  • "A perfect portrait of a futile situation. This was very well put together, and it leaves me with a feeling of sad resignation. But I guess the one thing you can keep doing is stir the soup, no matter what, just keep stirring. Where there is life, there is hope. No matter how frail. "
    Posted by Unknown on "Cancer Soup" by TropicalSnowstorm
  • "I'm a sucker for a well written personification of a problem. Insomnia, what a lady indeed. She and I have been together for many years, and we've got a pretty working relationship now. I like the way you wrote her out. And yeah, sometimes it's oh so hard to let her down easy. But for the sake of your sanity, you have to. Not your fault if she keeps coming around after right? Great piece, nice share. I really enjoyed this."
    Posted by Unknown on "A bit on the possessive side" by TropicalSnowstorm
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