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Innocent sting. seeing a shadow, confident that I have not seen anything. scents ..cologne, mouth, sick and blood. Eerie earth, angel meat, lushly skins, they speak us neglective___ Wolf doves, like blue moon cuts || Mirror air, handcuff sleep || Nor can I stop carefully, solar stiffing, theatre loud of skull ______a celo, a sleigh an ankle bracelet ..visitations broken ____I'll sleep a little when I'm brave again ....white at night , blue storm astrological decease ___a torso lullaby from a time so long ago that it cannot be remembered._____________________________stay confused, pretend you are deaf, blind, that you cant speak english__________ stay hidden its 4:33
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Posted by anaksunamun on "4:32 " by Corinthian
- "I want to reach out and hold you in your pain. Give something... but there's nothing... you have my love"
Posted by Cantara on "4:32 " by Corinthian
- "The gentle beauty of you even though you're in such pain rips my heart out."
Posted by Cantara on "4:32 " by Corinthian
- "I must agree. Her intelligence is astounding and otherworldly. I'm stunned by this because of her youth. What will she be like in old age...."
Posted by Cantara on "fraudulent asterisms" by Corinthian
- "Beautiful piece created was such a skillful use of imagery. This was a wonderful poem to read first thing in the morning. Ciao,T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Der Traum" by Corinthian
- "Beautiful. Simply beautiful. I read this and feel as though the narrator is forsaken in someway, be it in the biblical sense presented here, or in a meaning that goes deep beyond that. "
Posted by Pride Ed on "cobalt" by Corinthian
- "A bell in the dark. A woman's voice behind a ray of light, in the shadows of the abandoned, ancient shrine. Whispers in a language i know not of. Dark sanctuary, grant me the secrets she left behind. ... i wish i would have known you long enough to know the secret of 4:32. Each song you give, even now, as the cello echoes with her voice...each song i search for that moment of which you speak. Is it a passage from some tome of sorrow to which you were maiden protector? The song, like this song you've written, is forlorn. i feel it is this work here which speaks the most of your sorrow. That birth which never could be. The death where life should have come. You splintered there. You never could return to blue for the blue of that face. Oh, Sister, i weep with you this day. That echo you left behind, the almost~silent moan you chirped before eternal slumber...it comes now from my mouth. The music goes on. Life goes on and you'll not know how beautiful it could be. Return as some new form. We'll meet again under a better Moone."
Posted by Unknown on "4:32 " by Corinthian
- "What was this 4:32, i ponder? One moment in a song you gave me, Sister? Blue was of you. Dakrismena, i challenge those who could not Love you, because so many of us did. This is one of my favourites. So many on that list."
Posted by Unknown on "I cannot be loved " by Corinthian
- "You live now, do you not? So far beyond us. This is all true, Sister, "for that which falls highest suffers most". Inspiration, this. Inspiration into continuance. You died wanting to live. He will know that deep inside as he rises high without you. He will know."
Posted by Unknown on " what is to give light must endure burning" by Corinthian
- "It is our sorrow that makes the universe ache, not hers. She is out there now, having returned to that celestine presence from which she was spent. Mourn not, Brother, she is free. It is we that are bound now for a short time longer. It is we who await such freedom."
Posted by Unknown on "ashes asleep " by Corinthian
- "It is of You, Sister Lost To Us. Such were the last words of your warning. i heeded them as little as any, for we are all dark here. We all have sour times, though none so sweet as yours, Sister, none so...this. None so You. "
Posted by Unknown on "you are the bell of god " by Corinthian
- "Eyes shut with fear, fly screaming toward their inevitable destiny . We should learn to be quiet and write with fingers in the sand like you did , you are a celestial thing as defined by Galileo. And the contemplation of celestial things will make a man both speak and think more sublimely and magnificently when he descends to human affairs. Thankyou for the lessons , I miss you alot Corinthian"
Posted by Unknown on "ashes asleep " by Corinthian
- "if I'm not home... linger at my door, dear, as you pass. upon the sullen knob of misty brass, attach a garland there, of roses ~ and sprinkle it with love. (this presupposes)"
Posted by FadedBlues on "ashes asleep " by Corinthian
- ": ..... For alltid skal jeg huske dine, Soster Morke Sjel. For alltid skal jeg hore sanger dine. Rest in dark places, that your soul may now rest. Life was too harsh for your petals, the Corii rose has wilted. You are eternal. Fly."
Posted by Unknown on "ashes asleep " by Corinthian
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