Comments by All Members
- "Why is it that we try to rhyme, when least of all those assist our time? Hmm, seems a wicked wonder. Please don't ponder. Lovely and well written, dear."
Posted by Skye on "...Poisoned Melody " by SolApathy
- "I liked this one. Reminded me of the other day, I was workin with super glue and smelled the cyanoacrylate in my nose the rest of the day. Really gotta use ppe or use open air next time, lol"
Posted by ladislaus on "...Fumes" by SolApathy
- "Simple rituals help us acknowledge and honour them and safely navigate anniversaries.
So, too does poetry. Time may heal wounds but not grief eh?"
Posted by kinkifrog on "...Above the Clouds" by SolApathy
- "A challenge with gusto and then destitute words that seem to seek calm, peace. And the track you picked up there is really nice, too."
Posted by Skye on "...Obsidian Reflections " by SolApathy
- "This piece truly resonates with me. I feel so disconnected from the people around me bc I enjoy the simplicities in life and they find that so strange. It’s nice to know I’m not the only one. Beautifully written!"
Posted by in2th3Abyss on "...Sway" by SolApathy
- "Even if you took away the phones, people would find another device to stay antisocial with. You'll see black and white photos of rows of people burying their head in newspapers. It's not the device itself, it's the human condition. People like their circle and shy away from changing that circle. And honest talk: Heaven is the good times, hell is the bad ones. Nothin' beyond that. "
Posted by Skye on "...Sway" by SolApathy
- "Nice reminder to appreciate the wonders of the world around us, now more than ever., as you make note of. Pretty cool write. Cheers."
Posted by LIFEINVADER on "...Sway" by SolApathy
- "A commanding rhyme, with sharp corners and a sudden drop. Reading this, I had to mind the step."
Posted by Skye on "...Somber" by SolApathy
- "I would always hope for more. There is no love that can not be found, if you don't don't reach for it. Bullets and corsets are nothing new to me; I don't know what your vision is, but this resonates well more than I think it should,"
Posted by Skye on "...Chambered" by SolApathy
- "Oh, how your words drip with malice and hate,
A reflection of the darkness within, I state,
For in the throes of madness you reside,
Embracing pain and suffering far and wide.
Your desire for blood and chaos is all-consuming,
A fervor that leaves sanity in a state of ruin,
And as you paint the world with your hues,
You leave behind a trail of broken and bruised.
But know this, dear soul, your actions have a cost,
For the damage you inflict can never be lost,
And though in your dreams you may find solace,
In reality, your deeds are but a destructive imbalance.
So heed my words, and seek the light,
For in the darkness lies naught but blight,
And though the world may seem like your canvas,
Your shattered soul can never be mended."
Posted by Decadence Black on "...Canvas of Chaos" by SolApathy
- "Your poem is a haunting reminder of the pain and suffering one goes through in times of heartache and loss. But as the saying goes, "after every storm comes a rainbow". Hold onto hope, have faith, and keep moving forward. Life is unpredictable, but it is full of endless possibilities and opportunities for growth and happiness. Remember that you are not alone, and with time, healing will come. Trust in your strength and the support of loved ones, and a new sun will rise, bringing with it the promise of a brighter tomorrow."
Posted by Decadence Black on "...Chambered" by SolApathy
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