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"the best kind of shivers, love. ;) oh! i resend that email to your other address. here's hoping."
Posted by doll on the rag on "not an addict" by not an addict

"and thank you for reading. it's something of a release for me, to share something that troubles me so on a personal level with others... not a desensitization so much as a sharing of the burden? i think... ah, i dunno. feels nice though."
Posted by not an addict on "not an addict" by not an addict

"what kind of shivers? ;) and i am glad you enjoyed it... though i wish i hadn't had to write it."
Posted by not an addict on "not an addict" by not an addict

"as far as the poem goes... harsh-honest. "cleaned our teeth/ of the path your tongue had traced/ in full-on mockery/ of those things we shared with you." you give me shivers."
Posted by doll on the rag on "not an addict" by not an addict

"good stuff"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "an attempt at absolving this dissonance" by not an addict

"damn good write. chilling, haunts my mind and scrapes my heart, very effective imagery and expression."
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "dancing to the beat of psychosis" by not an addict

"some haunting, thought-provoking imagery and expression here and a sad romantic aura surrounds it all. good write, ty for sharing."
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "not an addict" by not an addict

"hee... it seems i've started something. =P self-titled poems for everyone! (except the whiny angsty spooky kids, or course.) "
Posted by doll on the rag on "not an addict" by not an addict

"one of my alltime favorites of yours, if only for the last bit: "and fully capable of retaliation." lovely, you are missed."
Posted by doll on the rag on "passerby(beloved)" by not an addict

"thank you muchly... in truth this was a bit too personal for me to believe that it might be viewed as pretty words by one who did not know the story... i'm glad it touched you."
Posted by not an addict on "an attempt at absolving this dissonance" by not an addict

"just, perfect. those last lines.. timeless.."
Posted by Unknown on "dancing to the beat of psychosis" by not an addict

"You have created a fine work, quite unlike anything I have ever read in the light of it's unique expression. I'm pleased I have discovered you, and, like elegant kiss, will be reading much more of you {the words on your profile page are exceptional, also}"
Posted by Unknown on "an attempt at absolving this dissonance" by not an addict

"Ahh, wonderful write, sweets. It held a soft undertone of power and calmness. "
Posted by Elegant Kiss on "passerby(beloved)" by not an addict

"You have a wonderful style. I'll have to read more of you."
Posted by Elegant Kiss on "an attempt at absolving this dissonance" by not an addict

"Damn. Last couple of lines were tremendous. Very nicely done:) ~Ship!"
Posted by Unknown on "dancing to the beat of psychosis" by not an addict

"ouch"
Posted by Unknown on "dancing to the beat of psychosis" by not an addict

"tears fell on the writing as well... though i'd not go so far as to say they pained me in doing so."
Posted by not an addict on "the burnt offerings of self (.renewal.)" by not an addict

"This DID make tears fall. Great write ~*~Tart~*~"
Posted by Kinkypoptart on "the burnt offerings of self (.renewal.)" by not an addict

"heh, i escape the strait jacket every time they stick that needle in my arm. I take off to La-La land. Great write ~*~Tart~*~"
Posted by Kinkypoptart on "how to escape a strait jacket" by not an addict

"you are amazingly talented. Good write ~*~Tart~*~"
Posted by Kinkypoptart on "passerby(beloved)" by not an addict

"Great write. I love your name... Not an Addict... I'm not an addict either... most of the time. However, all of us are addicted to something somewhere along the line. Great write ~*~Tart~*~"
Posted by Kinkypoptart on "dancing to the beat of psychosis" by not an addict

"it isn't understanding that i seek just a mind-numbing calm complacency. Great line... I love it ~*~tart~*~"
Posted by Kinkypoptart on "an attempt at absolving this dissonance" by not an addict

"Damn. This is one of the best pieces I've read. This almost made tears fall."
Posted by wandering druid on "the burnt offerings of self (.renewal.)" by not an addict

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