Comments by All Members
- "I'll give you better than darkdesires did. Ha, i'll give you an A. *sticks tongue out at Corey* Great write. I really enjoyed it. ~*~Tart~*~"
Posted by Kinkypoptart on "Save Me" by TwistedInnocence
- "i agree w/ every1 below me..and i've had this feeling, probably not as strong..i hope somebody saved you..and i love it, n welcome 2 DP! -Kel"
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "Save Me" by TwistedInnocence
- "Yeah, I really like this too. Especially for a first post, you're a lot better than many. I liked the subtle rhyming you used without getting wrapped up in rhyming everything, and the way you used descriptions without too many words."
Posted by Liz on "Save Me" by TwistedInnocence
- "I await to read more of you work. I used to write like this and I think that you tried to start cool and collect with slect words, but then just let them overflow. I give it a B+ lol"
Posted by darkdesires on "Save Me" by TwistedInnocence
- "i think you express something here that all of us have felt at some point---I know I have felt this--nice job"
Posted by Northstar on "Save Me" by TwistedInnocence
- "I applaud the fact that you vent your frustration through writing......constructive and honest.....Life is poetry, we're all living literature~elisa"
Posted by elisa on "Save Me" by TwistedInnocence
