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- "'...Something is up in countries slathered in pleasantries... ' ... that first line set the tone of the poem perfectly.... i'm gonna have to dissect this when i leave work."
Posted by elisa on "The Fag Poem" by Sepulcrawl
- "a sagacious blend of scorched heart strings and potency.This memory is worth keeping...lucky you to have to seen the exclusion of man from beast.I'm still waiting :)"
Posted by Unknown on "At the Whim Not of Mine" by Sepulcrawl
- "theme that can be fairly provocative along reader response lines... the words felled and graze tend to distract my minds eye into a pastoral direction that I cannot reconcile with the verbal theme.... and I will not say it again."
Posted by Unknown on "Say It Again" by Sepulcrawl
- "dare to do more than graze... is the graze the sleight of words that fails to invoke, fails to do more than wane without strike, without drawing more than a finger to the face... I dunno, I have a hard time riding the imagery, but there is definitely a th"
Posted by Unknown on "Say It Again" by Sepulcrawl
- "i really don't know how to read this... if i take a new critical approach... I'm thinkin I come up with a poignant vision of the finger and where upon the face.. the lips, a sleight of verbage upon the face... is the incantation in the title... as if a da"
Posted by Unknown on "Say It Again" by Sepulcrawl
- ", reeling in the night from lifelorn patrons of the squalid islands.".....Finally I have it in writing from a man's hand....can I get you to sign this in blood please?"
Posted by Unknown on "The December" by Sepulcrawl
- ""Man is a ludicrous beast;sunning and turning into the beat of tribal skins and cracking hammers"
Posted by Unknown on "The December" by Sepulcrawl
- "Most poems arent meant for people to understand the meaning but just to read ... poems are emotions about something(s) and a way for the author to express what ever is on his(her) chest *sigh* ~T~"
Posted by Cattarax on "The December" by Sepulcrawl
- "You are so nice to those who like your work ... but then again I dont like people who comment and then say " I like it but I dont know what to say about it " ... then why bother commenting .. sorry .. just my thoughts ~T~"
Posted by Cattarax on "Say It Again" by Sepulcrawl
- "The wording in this is remarkable ... I had to read it twice to fully understand everything you were trying to say .. :) ~T~"
Posted by Cattarax on "When You Say That" by Sepulcrawl
- "Either Metallica, or metallica. Always for the self (unless for someone dedicated). I know I don't make sense half the time, but I always like the feel... when I try to write a Quality Structured poem, it useually doesn't feel like me, and thus it sucks. "
Posted by Unknown on "When You Say That" by Sepulcrawl
- ""Plagued interstellar lights" This is real (I could say much more, but I'll keep it 'to the point'). Perfect final line."
Posted by Unknown on "When You Say That" by Sepulcrawl
- "You could be dead right, or you could be full of shit. i have not yet decided. Perhaps you do not possess the intellectual accuity to understand this -- perhaps few to none do"
Posted by Sepulcrawl on "When You Say That" by Sepulcrawl
- ""And flesh is rent"...and we can never own...I don't feel that your meaning is compromised by your word choice.you reflect the deterioration of body and time. Another wonderful write, my friend. ~Meg"
Posted by Unknown on "When You Say That" by Sepulcrawl
- "the question is, are you writing for you or for everyone else? if the first, excellent... if the second, i think they'll get more out of it if they understand it (provided that you aren't just showcasing the verbal aesthetics)"
Posted by stormtalk on "When You Say That" by Sepulcrawl
- "I think I see where you are coming from. However, I am not totally sure I don't wish for a departure from form. I am unsure what to do about it -- perhaps every poem needs a problem."
Posted by Sepulcrawl on "When You Say That" by Sepulcrawl
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