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- ""sweet ghost of my heart,
i let you go.
and i'll tuck you away..
and forget.
i will always love you." - I like the notions of 'ghosts of your heart', something that remains but is no longer vibrant. Great dichotomy between 'tucking away and forgetting' and always 'always loving'. This is a great piece! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "jaybird" by Philla
- "Finally someone with talent returns. We've been pretty starved as far as the returning/new members are concerned. Welcome back, you havent lost your skills"
Posted by Unknown on "jaybird" by Philla
- "This is the kind of write I love. You said so few
words, yet spoke volumes with them. And hit the emotion perfectly. Thanks. ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "jaybird" by Philla
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