Comments by All Members
- "Beautiful poem about
life, rebirth, & balance,
Askew & anew
Made me think of unbalanced
And balanced
This conveys yin & yang
(leaving) a dying past
For a new future life
A break up poem and baby birth
Fused in one brilliant write
Way to use the left & right brain....
"
Posted by MR feathered fox on "LIFE UPROOTED " by motherofnature
- "Life goes on, and our circle of friends and loved ones do indeed shed as leaves. All we can do is hope for a mild winter and the promise of new buds in the spring. Life can be long - Cheers MoN! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "LIFE UPROOTED " by motherofnature
- "Your poetry restores a much needed sense of wonder to our workaday world, while we deny those instincts that create formidable bonds; not meant to be broken. Cheers again (I had to flesh-out an earlier thought) - Dan "
Posted by dwells on "HE THRIVES OFF MY ERUPTION" by motherofnature
- "A rare foray into something oft ignored in our polite society that would put our kind above the animals we really are MoN. You have succeeded admirably on two distinct levels here - cheers for mothers and lovers everywhere! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "HE THRIVES OFF MY ERUPTION" by motherofnature
- "Haikus aren't easy. You have to say so much with so little. I think you did a nice job here."
Posted by Drea on "offspring" by motherofnature
- "thank you so much im so relieved someone enjoyed it and understood the message. so much to convey in such a little haiku. I hope it was bearable "
Posted by motherofnature on "offspring" by motherofnature
- "Great screen pic MoN and welcome to DP!
Children can transform the parents into many nurturing configurations hopefully. And then it will be their turn! You few words say so much. Cheers! - Dan "
Posted by dwells on "offspring" by motherofnature
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