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  • "We all have our coping mechanisms SI - and this one was stainless steel :) Welcome to DP and the repetition really drives home your extended metaphor - Cheers! - Dan "
    Posted by dwells on "She Made Herself From Metal" by Shaded_Iris
  • "I love the imagery you painted here as well as the metaphors. Very original and well written. This felt like a whole storm of emotions. I look forward to reading more from you. Welcome to DP! - 10:43"
    Posted by 10 Forty Three on "The Compass of a Monster " by Shaded_Iris
  • "The meter and flow are perfectly suited to the tone. Wistful and hard is a very hard feat to achieve. You have accomplished it brilliantly. Welcome and please stay a while."
    Posted by Amaryllis on "She Made Herself From Metal" by Shaded_Iris
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