Comments by All Members
- "was going to say that i liked the end best but then i read it again and realised that i love the whole thing. really very true and i agree with phantasmagoria, i love the style that you write with."
Posted by Unknown on "trichloromethane kisses" by Sky Singer
- "yeah my grammar is terrible ^-^. "m" is a very dear friend... he still comes around every now and then... i want to write a story that somewheat mirrors (and more or less explain) our past 5 years, but that's going to take some time, in the writing and em"
Posted by Sky Singer on "Forbidden" by Sky Singer
- "On a small grammatical note, those "it's"'s should all be "its." Other than that... not bad at all. Not my favorite of yours, either, but still better than the average write. Who's M?"
Posted by stormtalk on "Forbidden" by Sky Singer
- "I like the short-lined, double-spaced style you often write with, it's very easy and light to read, and it allows for your heavy content to show through. This poem hasn't had a tenth of the attention it deserves - great job."
Posted by stormtalk on "trichloromethane kisses" by Sky Singer
- ""and you don't know
which direction
will lead you
to land
or to the
end of the
earth." this ripped my brain off my body.
"
Posted by Unknown on "Writer's Block" by Sky Singer
- "I come back to this poem almost everyday, you help me remember my love, thank you. ~S."
Posted by SluG on "Just Hold Me." by Sky Singer
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