Comments by All Members
- "I love the angel-demon dichotomy chosen for this piece, and the earnest quality that comes with unbridled emotion, brings to mind my own paramour; the one person who, despite the wealth of rumours and madness that surrounded me, still tried to bridge the gap, the beauty to my rabid beast. Stay for awhile, hone your craft, you may find this place to your liking."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Angels and Demons " by AnaMia92
- ""We loved like our lives depended on it. And in a way it did"
A line, so excellently written and relatable.
One day, your heart shall be in it, to win it.
Cheers "
Posted by RoseTheBrokenHearted on "My Undying Love" by AnaMia92
- "It starts as mere melancholy memories, and then slams the heart into a deep misery of questions that even attacks the lost. I had to stop and let the riveting imagery of "angels pour their tears over us tonight" sink in to the causing effect of inclusion to the lost... Well done here.... Am I the only one who see this?? "
Posted by tmanzano on "My Undying Love" by AnaMia92
- "The ending line stamped it for me... Brill... Peace. Yes, I really enjoyed that ending line. "
Posted by tmanzano on "Peace" by AnaMia92
- "Well done, the imagery you spin here is riveting. I especially like the blood that is traveling between the glass. It lends strength to the visual. Very visceral for me... I wrote a piece similar to this called "Crazy Hot". Very similar in ideas. Good read. Welcome to DP..."
Posted by tmanzano on "Screaming for YOU My Tragic , Yet Beautiful Masterpiece" by AnaMia92
- "The title is well thought out. This piece is direct and with no pulled punch. The emptiness owned and written here is palpable. It is thickly expressed and leaves the reader wanting to shake the subject awake. Depression can be a force in writing. Sometimes the only outlet one has. Keep writing. Read as many other works as you can. Envelope yourself in it. Structure your pieces and take this time to find yourself. Because here is what will happen... One day things will get better, and the muse will leave you. You will left to stare into the abyss, wishing it to come back. Conjuring is the most difficult. Good luck."
Posted by tmanzano on "Drunk on Loneliness " by AnaMia92
- "Well as upset as I am to say.... This is the life I'm living at the moment. Which Is why it is so raw. I am overjoyed aswell that you found this poem so fascinating. "
Posted by AnaMia92 on "Peace" by AnaMia92
- "I can only hope that this is a creative work and not an entry from your true life. I am frankly alarmed by it and want to reach out and hold you, assuring you that all things -- even the worst of them -- do pass away and one can be as happy as they make up their minds to be. An enthralling read, but I am left uneasy by its raw confessional tone."
Posted by Unknown on "Peace" by AnaMia92
