Comments by All Members
- "And the eagle returns for his daily lunch of liver... Always enamored of a nautical theme and this was superb 3F. Got a touch of the Ancient Mariner before diving to deeper deaths. Nicely done and cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Breathing Through Old Wounds" by FellowFutureFossil
- "Seems to be a very overly complex vernacular to say life is cruel for encouraging the demise of a love/hate relationship. Not sure that my interpretation is correct or not but either way don't take my opinion as bad critism. Don't dumb down your work for people like myself with limited capacities lol. I at least enjoyed the meaning I assume it to be about, and I love butterflies so the title drew me in instantly ;)"
Posted by Unknown on "Guilty Butterflies" by FellowFutureFossil
- "An interesting work of confessional poetry. I might question the stanza breaks but somehow the account remains intact and made the mechanics less important. Good job."
Posted by Unknown on "Guilty Butterflies" by FellowFutureFossil
- "I like the idea of the dead laughing and not weeping. solid writing ! keep up the great work \m/
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Posted by Unknown on "Oaken " by FellowFutureFossil