Comments by All Members
- "awww. . much sorrow, seems like you have genuine feelings for this boy.man.whatever. . a pretty piece, that paints a beautiful view of loving/missing someone. nicely done"
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "Oh, To Be Real" by Atalanta
- "I'm not quite sure what to say to this as a LoTR purist... I think you have captured the essence of Arwen's character, though Tolkien did not tell us very much about her..."
Posted by Delphoid-Q on "Arwen's Song" by Atalanta
- "im not intirely positive but i think they did something like this but never put it in the book, but as usual i could be wrong.. very nice though i liked it"
Posted by Draven on "Arwen's Song" by Atalanta
- "where can i meet this guy??? ithink i need a moist towelette or something. dark and erotic...my kinda poetess. -zay"
Posted by Unknown on "Fucktoy" by Atalanta
- "naughty, but not nice. I would prefer free hands, used to explore crevices.
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Posted by Unknown on "Fucktoy" by Atalanta
- "Wow . . this is . . wow. . it's going on my favourites . . yummy ;) "
Posted by Unknown on "Fucktoy" by Atalanta
- "geez-us, you sexy writer. ;)... :P.. loved the last three lines "play with me, slam into me whenever you are eaten up with desire", perfect ending to this"
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "Fucktoy" by Atalanta
- "this is absolutely horrible, I hope the bastard pays dearly. and I hope that you feel better soon, I really had no idea this happened to you. love you very much lanta--calamity--"
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "So Close to Death" by Atalanta
- "nice write sweetie, guy must be an idiot to give up on a beautiful person like yourself. i like the simplicity of the racing thoughts... the questioning.. well done"
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "A Virgin's Prayer" by Atalanta
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