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  • ""in the crevices of the eroded soul" GREAT LINE! great imagery, i can actually see it."
    Posted by AMIEVEEL on "Atrophy" by Zhee
  • "This was a great write. Enjoyed it very well. Thank You. -Michael"
    Posted by DarkWolf on "FILTH" by Zhee
  • ""I drink the poison oozing in, I am cut with the blade of sin. " kool lines. Great ending too. Good work! ~ Psychotic"
    Posted by Unknown on "FILTH" by Zhee
  • "Anger and awesomeness all combined into one. The structure of this is perfection reinkarnated to words. Super."
    Posted by Storm on "FILTH" by Zhee
  • "Mick Jagger (of the Rolling Stones) once told people, "It's okay to let yourself go as long as you can let yourself back." You've done it here."
    Posted by Unknown on "Ramblings Of The Psychotic Mind" by Zhee
  • "Did you ever hear the Clive Barker quote. He said "Every body is a book of blood. Whenever we're open, we're red." This poem expresses that phrase most eloquenty. Thank you. ~Shane~"
    Posted by Unknown on "Atrophy" by Zhee
  • "You know Zhee, I was going to do a piece called STOLEN FACES, but haven't. This is my kind of work. Post more. Welcome to DP. ~Shane~"
    Posted by Unknown on "Lost Faces" by Zhee
  • "*wow* -- I can totally relate to the themes you so eloquently express here--so nicely done"
    Posted by Northstar on "Lost Faces" by Zhee
  • "oh man ... this made me feel really uncomfortable ..relentless , drilling ... and dedicated to itself , no bright side .... great work .. funguy"
    Posted by capt_funguy on "Lost Faces" by Zhee
  • "The arid dictum of feeling :) Par excellence in totality...apologies for brief comment...rushing"
    Posted by Solace on "Atrophy" by Zhee
  • ""And the memories of razor blades that your blood managed to stain" I really love that one, too. Ties into the insanity; the confusion of it all, not really knowing when, how, or why you do things..it just somehow "manages" to be."
    Posted by Zara Synn on "Ramblings Of The Psychotic Mind" by Zhee
  • "I loved the second stanza, though none of it was unloveable. Short yet abundant in imagery. "
    Posted by Zara Synn on "Atrophy" by Zhee
  • ""With all the faceless bodies - Who once sold their souls. . .. " made me think here Zhee, great write :)"
    Posted by Unknown on "The Metal Box" by Zhee
  • "and yeah, welcome to DP Zhee, i can see you'll fit right in..."
    Posted by Unknown on "Atrophy" by Zhee
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