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  • "For me, this seems to allow an ambiguity, perhaps... where the release that is begged is desired by him as if ecstasy, but the bleeding convinces me that you have other designs. Does his flesh being within rosary's reach suggest that he has something for which to repent?"
    Posted by Unknown on "Me at you" by elisa
  • ""within rosary's reach"..that held high for me, a constant moving thought robed in anxious sweat."
    Posted by Unknown on "Me at you" by elisa
  • "Mmmmm...This was deliciously horny and spoke to me of 2 people gagging to fuck each other's brains out. Lusty, unholy brilliance. Love it :)"
    Posted by carlosjackal on "Me at you" by elisa
  • "thank you Winter. i've been reluctant to post ....my writing has been a bit on the dark side. an acquired taste even."
    Posted by elisa on "The Reckoning" by elisa
  • "I do agree with Narcissa, You shold poet more often. every time you do, such powerful works emerge from the ether... Though perhaps the time is what makes them so potent...hmm..."
    Posted by Winter Born on "The Reckoning" by elisa
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