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"This was written with such clarity, honesty and beauty. A fave."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Love Your Son. Love, Your Son" by tristanjinx

"Dammit... I'm all emotional. I wasn't prepared for this and this piece really got the best of me. Aside from that, you're an amazingly strong individual with a lot of fight inside you... I'll be your sidekick through your next journey through hell. (((hugs&LoVes))) --Nett "
Posted by soul_versing on "Love Your Son. Love, Your Son" by tristanjinx

" _________________. ...I'm speechless. (it's official) --I'm fortunate enough to leave you with the worst review ever. In my justification, I leave you with a 10. ...:) "
Posted by soul_versing on "Written on the Back of a Recipt for a Cherry Snapple " by tristanjinx

"Ah even the darkest souls get just a little sappy sometimes. And I'm alright for the most part."
Posted by Commander_Cadaver on "Written on the Back of a Recipt for a Cherry Snapple " by tristanjinx

"Thank you, thank you! Yes, there were some heavy hints toward a history of self-harm. I really appreciate the feedback and I'm glad that you enjoy it!"
Posted by tristanjinx on "Written on the Back of a Recipt for a Cherry Snapple " by tristanjinx

"That was exactly the feel I was going for. Usually, I write and rewrite until I either give up or have everything as I want it. This time I just decided to write and let it be flawed, because, hell, it's genuine."
Posted by tristanjinx on "Written on the Back of a Recipt for a Cherry Snapple " by tristanjinx

"Apparently I thought it was rougher than it was. Haha. Thank you for the welcome, and I'm doing well, if not being a touch too sappy. Hope you're well."
Posted by tristanjinx on "Written on the Back of a Recipt for a Cherry Snapple " by tristanjinx

"This is a beautiful piece.. The emotions put on the paper are very vivid and intense.. One can feel your deep love for him.. And you deserve perfect too.. Thank you for sharing :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Written on the Back of a Recipt for a Cherry Snapple " by tristanjinx

"This is a masterpiece! I love the tone and feel of this one, it is vulnerable and sweet. You also manage to be...deftly clumsy with it, which gives it such a genuine, "from the heart" feel. Wonderful, wonderful job! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Written on the Back of a Recipt for a Cherry Snapple " by tristanjinx

"this poem is so fucking good! I love how you refer to the flesh being the emotion you come across, and the flesh is punished metaporically for not really being good enough for him, its genius how you told it. its filled with let down and your quest in poetry to make this a way to express your feelings to him while your thoughts seem unsure and almost regrettable. and its beautiful how you use it in a way to take it out on yourself by directing your regret to the very thing that could express yourself...your poems. reminds me of self harming, in a writing sense. but that's how I kinda saw this. idk, im all over this, its just amazing. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Written on the Back of a Recipt for a Cherry Snapple " by tristanjinx

"This is the kind of self respect I wish I could have for myself sometimes. Feeling like there's no need for shame or nervousness about myself. Not comparing myself to someone I could never be. You nailed the feeling."
Posted by Unknown on "Written on the Back of a Recipt for a Cherry Snapple " by tristanjinx

"Since you don't want to talk about this write...umm welcome back and how are you? "
Posted by Commander_Cadaver on "Written on the Back of a Recipt for a Cherry Snapple " by tristanjinx

"Holy crud, your comment is more valuable and beautiful than the poem itself. Thank thank thank!"
Posted by tristanjinx on "Love Your Son. Love, Your Son" by tristanjinx

"This was awesome. At first I was confused at the title but that ending really MAKES this poem. Whatever you do, keep writing. Nothing more to say than that. - BSBB"
Posted by Bittersweetbedbyes on "Love Your Son. Love, Your Son" by tristanjinx

"This is beautifully written, I'm torn in so many directions I can't even keep my thoughts straight trying to comment. This is tragic and sorrowful and the death of a person and the life that grows like a weed between the cracks, which is wonderful and harrowing and sad all at the same time. Welcome to Dark Poetry, dearie, I think you will fit in just fine around here. ~Cheers love~"
Posted by The_Broken_Fox_2112 on "Love Your Son. Love, Your Son" by tristanjinx

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