Comments by All Members
- "Very cool write, Poet. I liked "devour all the insects of reality" - I definitely feel like reality is composed entirely of bugs sometimes. The last stanza sums it up perfectly - like a strong essay in poetry form."
Posted by stormtalk on "facepaint vendor pharmaceutical" by Future of Despond
- "Excellence, even in the weariest of hours... The first stanza reminded me of a picture (I think you sent me) of a bloody oceana... the last lines reminded me of a newspaper headline tragedy... Excellence, my friend..._Raven"
Posted by Raven on "Interlude" by Future of Despond
[Next]