Comments by All Members
- "Well written, and nicely portrayed. It shows how even the person that's on top has someone higher than them pulling their strings telling then what to do. Tbh while I was reading this I was thinking of Obama. Lol."
Posted by Unknown on "Im tired Mr. Puppet." by Shadow lost to the light
- "I'd give some platitude, about life being tough. Or tell you that it gets easier.
I'd say that it'll all be worth it, if you believe in something. There are many things that I could say. But what I will say, In a dog eat dog world, be a wolf instead. Bite first, bite hard, and fight to the last. Cheers!"
Posted by Aleator on "Happiness, What a chore." by Shadow lost to the light
- "oh well.. Looks like you're good now. Looking forward to read from you. I myself have not been able to post my works cuz they're all in my phone and i dunno why but i cant post from here, i have to use th laptop and then type everything there, so.. Yh thats annoying. Anyway, you mister, keep writing and yh well it's my pleasure to appreciate what deserves appreciation "
Posted by Unknown on "Angel wings" by Shadow lost to the light
- "yeah I unfortunately had to because I was trying to enter a poem into the current contest. it wouldn't let me do that ether because I am just a trial member. I really like the website ill get the normal member account pretty soon. ill then put a pawn and his mindset back up along with some others I've been thinking about doing. thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my works it means a lot, :)"
Posted by Shadow lost to the light on "Angel wings" by Shadow lost to the light
- "oh well, that sucks! Is your account not a permanent one? Will it like expire and all? You should ask someone about this. Someone who knows more than i do of course cuz i'd really like to keep reading your works ya know! And i see you've also deleted a pawn of th mindset? That sucks too"
Posted by Unknown on "Angel wings" by Shadow lost to the light
- "line 9, 13 and 14 and every other line is just brilliant. It describes us in a way that i believe almost everyone can relate to. Just great! "
Posted by Unknown on "Human" by Shadow lost to the light
