terms of your surrender

By Shadow lost to the light

I'm tired of your disguise.
Maybe we can compromise.
You agree to give up all lies.
And ill agree to not take sides.
You try to empathize with me.
And ill try to emphasize my plea.
You give it your all in at least one attempt.
And ill give it my all to try and show contempt.
you accomplish what needs to be done.
And ill make sure you feel like you've won.
You do whatever it takes for us to forget the past.
And ill do what I must to make sure things last.
you provide the ideas to keep life eventful.
and ill hold you together and keep you from going mental.
although you think you do, make sure you know the deal.
and ill show you everyday that nothing could be more real.
now go off and prepare yourself for more then you can endure,
as I go and finish this final draft of the terms of your surrender.

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Copyright 2014 Shadow lost to the light
Published on Sunday, July 6, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Love the structure of the poem! Feels like you're falling down the staircase with the flow of your feelings.

  • Shadow lost to the light On Monday, July 7, 2014, Shadow lost to the light (8)By person wrote:

    thank you I appreciate it

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