Comments by All Members
- "fuck yeah man, i hope you have some talented musical friends, or are in a band already, because i'd frkn love to hear this belted out. awesome."
Posted by Unknown on "New Beginning" by Graveyard_Desciple
- "i know-that if i were to make love to you, i would take every last kiss back from you. if theres one thing i know, its regret. we have slumber parties and eat sandwiches full of lies. yum yum."
Posted by Twilight on "Lights Out" by Graveyard_Desciple
- "You make casue of your name dontcha? Completely agree with the "Beauty is a curse" idea, it really is. Good poem."
Posted by Storm on "Curse" by Graveyard_Desciple
- "fuck yeah man, you've just earnt this peice a place on my favs and on my poet list. this was incredible, your word manipulations, phrasing and emotional unleashings are phenomenal. Much appreciation :-Aaron"
Posted by Unknown on "another reason to live" by Graveyard_Desciple
- ""medication is now
causing me to smile
Imprisoning the pain
I'm tranquil for a while
Artificial happiness has saved me from myself
Now I'm stuck in a dreamland I like to call my hell" fark yeah, i feel ya there dude, rock on."
Posted by Unknown on "Imprisonoing the pain" by Graveyard_Desciple
- "good poem...6th stanza (I am ready to fight back), doesnt flow like the rest of the poem...would u consider taking out "is" in the 3rd line? and "they say" in the 4th? other than that..wow *krystal*"
Posted by GirlintheBox on "Pyre" by Graveyard_Desciple
- "-Why is it that every time I try to be serene
I sit awake all alone haunted by my dreams?
I once held something pure and they took her away
They said it's for my own good yet I'm the one who's paid-
i love that.."
Posted by Unknown on "An Excersise In Futility" by Graveyard_Desciple
- "this another good one. this girl, u really love her. i hope u get her in the end. u care so much about her, she would be lucky 2 have u. - Lauren"
Posted by Unknown on "Give Me Life" by Graveyard_Desciple
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