Comments by All Members
- "I can believe you mean these words. If I didnt then this would be horror. I hate watching people try to fufill themselves and fail. I would rather watch death then. I am not proud of that fact. But you should be proud of this. "
Posted by A_Puppet_Show on "Mrs. Submissive" by glasshouse
- "It's a shame in the year 2007, that many men haven't evolved beyond what you describe. But then, if man truly evolved, he would become woman =) Good, strong write. -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Mrs. Submissive" by glasshouse
- "stars as stepping stones to the heavens...what an amazing image!! 'And we'll frolic and dance...' loved it!"
Posted by Unknown on "Orgasmic Storm" by glasshouse
- "I like your use of wind, water and stars. You make it preaty to say the least. A short write, but a wellkept feeling"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "Haggard" by glasshouse
- "Thats so unfair of you... No realy. This was words of impact. Powerfull and as allways I as a a man feel the urge to scream after reading such writes"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "Mrs. Submissive" by glasshouse
- "I enjoyed this. it felt like looking out at the view from mountains. feeling intrinsic to everything around you.as if the wavering with the trees. great write"
Posted by Anth on "Orgasmic Storm" by glasshouse
- "More along the lines of passion. Passion is a wind that blows and moves us all and blah blah blah. And when I mentioned smell, it was more a reference to knowing it with all your senses. "
Posted by glasshouse on "Orgasmic Storm" by glasshouse
- "Don't worry, thats just the way my twisted mind picked it up *lol* I couldn't comprehend anything during sex that would be a wind, blown, and possibly smelt *lol* Regardless it is a great poem. Just what imagery WERE you going for there though?"
Posted by Preacher X on "Orgasmic Storm" by glasshouse
- "Absolutely fantastic imagery. Although i must admit that the "ride the wind" in the whole sex/orgasm traslated to earth nature thing, pretty much clicked in my head as farting during sex *lol*"
Posted by Preacher X on "Orgasmic Storm" by glasshouse
- "*dances with shifty eyes not knowing what he has gotten himself into* I like this write. seems like you just shook it out your sleeve"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "Orgasmic Storm" by glasshouse
- "beautifull imagery, I love the thought you put into it, especially the last 3 lines. To hold on to that which you love despite the cost, truly beautifull."
Posted by Grim_Sorrow on "Haggard" by glasshouse
- "So sombre, meloncholy, the way it is worded is as B.U. put it, gentle. Excellant write. -Saeth-"
Posted by Trigger on "Haggard" by glasshouse
- ""But she became toxicity". Nice twist at the ending. Compelling and nicely crafted. I love the metaphor of how She found her heart... there is a very nice rhythmic flow/structure to this poem."
Posted by Unknown on "Empty Corridor Fixation" by glasshouse
- ""…because if breath walked away". Simple, yet elegant. There is an epic hint at so much more that you leave to the moment, as expressed by the title. And a gentle sadness that is so much more profound, told between the words; "_______ but beautiful.""
Posted by Unknown on "Haggard" by glasshouse
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