Comments by All Members
- "this was ingenious yet mad. crazy beautiful or beautifully crazy! i cant decide!!!!! wow thank you for the fantastically amazing mind trip"
Posted by Unknown on "Hollow Pity Sadness" by EviscerationX
- "Dude, I had to fucking say something. I remeber when you wrote this. It's been a long fucking time, but it still blows me away. And you said I was better?"
Posted by Zahgurim on "Hollow Pity Sadness" by EviscerationX
- "the ending caugh my eye first and it scared me away from the piece itself...the few lines that i scanned through were just as scary. dont take this the wrong way. i just frighten easily..."
Posted by Twilight on "Look Into These Eyes" by EviscerationX
- "wow. amazing. I love it. "Every fucking face, a million fucking same " great line. fantastic write."
Posted by AHHH on "This Image" by EviscerationX
- "beautifuly written and so tragic. that brought a tears to my eye...seriously. i knew you felt this way, but when i actually see it written, it cuts very deep."
Posted by Zahgurim on "No More Tears" by EviscerationX
- "jesus! quite a bit of anger and hatred there good buddy. i like it a lot. glad to see that you are posting new stuff, and good stuff. i suck at feedback. but hey, i try. i'm off! to read the other"
Posted by Zahgurim on "Look Into These Eyes" by EviscerationX
- ""I grew jealous of the summer breeze that blew through your hair, the sunlight that kissed your skin" eeeeeeee. This broke my heart."
Posted by Unknown on "No More Tears" by EviscerationX
- "this is really nice, i have only seen one other good work about a deceased woman that touched me- I Wish( a song by R Kelly). This is really beautiful.
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Posted by FallenFaith on "No More Tears" by EviscerationX
- "-hugs tight- that makes me feel a bit sad. but things're okay, and will get better, even if you do miss her right now."
Posted by Unknown on "No More Tears" by EviscerationX
- "The person I am describing is no longer alive...I wrote this to tell her good bye...at least in my heart and mind. It helped me to close up old wounds. I miss her..."
Posted by EviscerationX on "No More Tears" by EviscerationX
- "this speaks to me a bit, reminds me of somebody who said some things like this kinda to me, but in words obviously, not with actions. i like this because of that reason, and how you put it together. nice job."
Posted by Unknown on "No More Tears" by EviscerationX
- "Lovely, yet somehow unsettled...time heals all, but some of us don't always see that there are always days ahead."
Posted by Unknown on "Lost" by EviscerationX
- "Like sugar-coated "candy"...drugs for the mind...this is a fucking taste I like on the tip of my tongue...I need more...please give me more. "
Posted by Unknown on "Hollow Pity Sadness" by EviscerationX
- "I agree with Oz...this was like a fork was stabbed into my heart and forcefully twisted around...pivotal emotion, as my heart oozes down my shirt...intense."
Posted by Unknown on "Don't Wanna Lose You" by EviscerationX
- "this hurt ... excellent transcription of the brain's static frenzy .. cool man ... post some more soon ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "This Image" by EviscerationX
- "this piece is alive ... full throttle and in your face ... a crazed combination of aliteration , message , and madness .. fuckin' great work .. funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "Hollow Pity Sadness" by EviscerationX
- "you write with unsettled eyes... that's such a nifty thing... join the DP therapy group darlin', stick around. Sue"
Posted by Mute Serenade on "Lost" by EviscerationX
- ".."Every time I close my eyes, I see your face Remembering the smell of your hair And your soft touch Your skin against mine" it does become a true burden when the simple joys in life become replays in life,....."
Posted by -Oz- on "Don't Wanna Lose You" by EviscerationX