Hollow Pity Sadness

By EviscerationX

Death in crack form, smoking the water bong, fungi, tap ass,
like a frozen vomit bag, smoking crack, body bag, backhand
that stupid fucking slut, hot chick with a hot butt,
falling down my skull cracks, jam my eyes with sharp
tacs, run over on train tracks, smoking gun, not much
fun, swollen vagina cotton mouth swabs, bloody gums,
twisted knobs, cherry shnops, fucking cops, wait a
while, to kill that fucking pedophile with the
stupid smile, raping quaint pig, fake black wig
with bloody nails, fall and break through the
rails of the mind, can't find it, it goes
blind, don't fucking take it, it's mine,
bashing my head into the wall while
listening to the voices in my mind, shameful
hate, dead fish bait, don't masturbate, or have
a date...with the devil, fucking low is your
level, you're nothing but shit, lick that clit
until she screams, you'll see what I mean, I always
wanted to kiss her, but I wither and blister, the
feeling is cold and blunt, you stupid cunt, everlasting
angels in the sky, don't get high, don't know why, my
lingering love runs dry, this shit is whack, all is hate and violence, young girls get pregnant, become alone in the
silence, fucking defiance, don't let yourself go, with nothing
to show, the world crumbles down, souls dead I've found, losing
hope, no time to mope, and hollow pity sadness, madness,
caress me gently and leave me to cry and just
let me die...

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Copyright 2004 EviscerationX
Published on Saturday, May 1, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: this was ingenious yet mad. crazy beautiful or beautifully crazy! i cant decide!!!!! wow thank you for the fantastically amazing mind trip

  • Zahgurim On Monday, April 2, 2007, Zahgurim (29)By person wrote:

    Dude, I had to fucking say something. I remeber when you wrote this. It's been a long fucking time, but it still blows me away. And you said I was better?

  • A former member wrote: What a trip, the hysteria is mind numbing.

  • A former member wrote: Like sugar-coated "candy"...drugs for the mind...this is a fucking taste I like on the tip of my tongue...I need more...please give me more.

  • capt_funguy On Monday, July 26, 2004, capt_funguy (778)By person wrote:

    this piece is alive ... full throttle and in your face ... a crazed combination of aliteration , message , and madness .. fuckin' great work .. funguy

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