Comments by All Members
- "ho... what a fun piece.. i like the curt, bluff feel of this, and the thoughtful idea behind this.. the first three stanzas hit a chord, but i think you can do better on the last stanza. just my subjective two cents"
Posted by sulkylime on "The Canvas" by SilencedAngel
- ""So locked up inside myself
To hide from the pain" I love this part I understand it so well. Great write ~Kirsten~"
Posted by K_Love on "Caged" by SilencedAngel
- "thanks for the comments though you guys are making me blush :) all i can say is i just tried to share what i was feeling, i'm glad you all liked it"
Posted by SilencedAngel on "in my head" by SilencedAngel
- "Aye, I'm sure most of us feel this way at least some times in our lives. But i agree with Kristen, yet another work well done."
Posted by Unknown on "in my head" by SilencedAngel
- "Ah, I know this feeling very well, but I've never written it out, you've portrayed this very well, great job ~Kirsten~"
Posted by K_Love on "in my head" by SilencedAngel
- "this makes a lot of sense, so very well written and expressed, excellent work"
Posted by Anth on "Caged" by SilencedAngel
- "learning to love after you have lost is hard, but it comes. love'll always be there, somewhere. nice write."
Posted by Skye on "Caged" by SilencedAngel
- "sad and hopeless . . reminds me of that feeling when all you want is a safe harbor but you know the bloody thing is mined. nice write."
Posted by cre on "That's Me" by SilencedAngel
- "Very good! I went through a time like this not too long ago... it will make you wiser, this is true. You have to put yourself out there though. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Caged" by SilencedAngel
- "Thank you so much for the praise. Though your making me blush here, thank you. I'm glad that you enjoy my style of writing. I hope that you enjoy reading other works of mine as I enjoy reading yours."
Posted by SilencedAngel on "That's Me" by SilencedAngel
- "Are your eyes really wide open, or are they closed, possibilities run endlessly down endless streams, closing off those possibilities denies a choice you once had...Choice is the crux of the matter, choose wisely..."
Posted by Solace on "Your Not Welcome" by SilencedAngel
- "Learning to live is like learning to fly...And we are birds without wings in cages...Thats all that would come from my cogitation today...apologies for my inability to comment further..."
Posted by Solace on "Caged" by SilencedAngel
- "I can but surmise what this means in terms of a realistic sense. My mind forces me to attempt to dissemble on a far too impersonal level. But try i shall..."
Posted by Solace on "Caged" by SilencedAngel
- "_more power to you!people...they suck the fucking life out of you,take you for granted,use you,abuse you...i know that i have allowed myself to be victimized...people can be so heartless.oh,yes...i can relate.-tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "Your Not Welcome" by SilencedAngel
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