Pretending

By SilencedAngel

Touch me softly
Let me pretend that you care

Kiss me slowly
Let me pretend that your only mine

Hold me gently
Let me pretend that you think of me

I need my little world of illusions
Or else my grief
Would overwhelm me
And I would crumble into
A thousand pieces

Just as my heart
Is now

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Copyright 2004 SilencedAngel
Published on Saturday, April 3, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: From sweet to bitter at just the right pace, lovely

  • a restless wanderer On Saturday, April 3, 2004, a restless wanderer (14)By person wrote:

    I'm in the same place right now, I don't care what you do tomorrow, just hold me tonight...nice write

  • Necromancer On Saturday, April 3, 2004, Necromancer (71)By person wrote:

    you write how i feel. let your feelings show . i love it ~Necro

  • Beautiful Scars On Saturday, April 3, 2004, Beautiful Scars (175)By person wrote:

    We all need out illusions to keep us sane...-fairy-

  • Jedi_MindFuck On Saturday, April 17, 2004, Jedi_MindFuck (244)By person wrote:

    i disagree, darkfairy. by burying ourselves in illusion, we banish ourselves from reality...then again, what is reality?...from there, the cup drastically changes from half full to half empty...to never enough. just a thought. ///Jedi\\\

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