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- ""While
White noise tides
And flutters my lids /Floating through notes and tempos" Yes, the notes & tempos, your rhythm as seductive & slow as eternity upon the lips you beat into wings. This is a poetic embrace, nicely crafted."
Posted by Unknown on "Eternity Was On Our Lips" by Bella Butchery
- "This was absolutely gorgeous.."A forgotten fragment/Of a shallow kiss/A hallow vessel/Floating through notes and tempos"..and the lead up to the ending and the ending itself were magnificent..Write on, Brother.."
Posted by carlosjackal on "Eternity Was On Our Lips" by Bella Butchery
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