Comments by All Members
- "I'd say wow, but Tim's already done that. This was mind numbing intense, reached in and pulled something from me. ~ mw"
Posted by manywalks on "Trench." by Mute Serenade
- "_"So much constriction
Restriction
On tongues
On words
It's nearly rotted away"...communication withers...thoughts screened...words,unsaid...that stanza...wow...this is awesome.as always...you know.thanx,Sue.:)tim "
Posted by suicideseason on "Trench." by Mute Serenade
- "this was, for lack of a better word, beautiful. Subtley charming and nothing missing. The poignancy of this piece is mind-shattering...I have indeed fallen in love ::swoons:: hehe"
Posted by hate_doll on "Ephedrine" by Mute Serenade
- "are you kidding me...he kicks ass. and he is an amazing poet. endless words and compliments to the capt. and for the truth in this piece. well done again my friend. well done."
Posted by Twilight on "FloodMaster of Greasy Lake" by Mute Serenade
- "heart and soul. on this unworthy page....i can explain the depth and feeling in this. and i bet you a million you cant either. this is beyond even my words...i have nothing to say. wake me when this isnt amazing. therefore-i lie stranded for eternity."
Posted by Twilight on "In the works (i'll finish it one day)" by Mute Serenade
- "all your stuff i amazing. so i doubt that this is your all time high. but it is pretty awesome."The snow screen that's left
When the tape stopped playing." it is definately simple to find well thought line sin here, im in awe yet again
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Posted by Twilight on "Dexedrine" by Mute Serenade
- "beginning-the intro to saddness. then you slowly build us up with filling thoughts as you rest us at the beautifully well written ending."
Posted by Twilight on "I do believe..." by Mute Serenade
- "o...the passion. deep breaths and sighs of comfort. how we long for the feeling. and nearly kill ourselves when it comes."
Posted by Twilight on "Icicle" by Mute Serenade
- "follow midnight. FOLLOW MIDNIGHT! tracing its steps into oblivion...allowing yourself to come together with it. as one-enigma. well done."
Posted by Twilight on "Paste" by Mute Serenade
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