Comments by All Members
- "holy shit lady!! thats the second time in a week.. smile, smile, gasp!! :) ~b"
Posted by blue on "crush" by purr_verse
- "This is pretty chilly. I feel I am sometimes lost. This is really a great piece. You really do need to stop by more. Wonderful as always!"
Posted by Sepulcrawl on "her name was cinders" by purr_verse
- "Oh god, You had me smiling until the end lines.. damn, talk about dropping out the bottom! You've done your job here evoking emotion purr! ~b"
Posted by blue on "her name was cinders" by purr_verse
- "thank you so much for the comment! you're an incredible writer and your visions are so crystal clear, it almost hurts."
Posted by wannabe_rebel on "crush" by purr_verse
- "think about her. (and the staff really did name her Cinders). I came back the next week and adopted a cat, who I still have. He turns 17 in November. :)"
Posted by purr_verse on "her name was cinders" by purr_verse
- "I could have saved this kitten, but didn't. I thought somebody else would take her for sure. 16 years ago, when I volunteer-worked at the RSPCA. That was it - I had to leave before I DID become the Crazy Cat Lady and take every cat home with me. I still t"
Posted by purr_verse on "her name was cinders" by purr_verse
- "I was going to gag (being cynical & spitefully unlovalble) until I read the end. Deliciously evil. (the present) "I hope it will touch your heart" - so very un-divine. "
Posted by TheBardOfBlasphemy on "crush" by purr_verse
- "You have such a talent, dear. This seems destined to become a rare classic. You find a way of presenting your streaming thoughts, ideas, with such definition. Everything you write seems to evoke something within me..This piece is simply beyond compare"
Posted by Unknown on "her name was cinders" by purr_verse
- "aye..and this is why I do not give my foundlings to the pound..I find them new homes all on my own...it's sickening what we consider humane..."
Posted by Unknown on "her name was cinders" by purr_verse
- "heart-wrenching imagery and expression of things too painful to think about so we push them to the backs of our mind. you broke my heart with exquisite semantics."
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "her name was cinders" by purr_verse
- "...cinders falling. And a cinder has been born, like 'tiny feline explosion', in Mephistopheles...'yellow fire-eyes gleaming.' Even if he always greets you w/ a gurgle & a purr... I'd fav this one, but am limited (sorry)."
Posted by Unknown on "her name was cinders" by purr_verse
- "...Ted Hughes, "When I saw little rabbits with their heads crushed on roads/I knew I rode the wheel of the galaxy." From The Scream. Your words are a creative gift in this poetic galaxy; thank you, even if this one brings tears like screams...cinders fall"
Posted by Unknown on "her name was cinders" by purr_verse
- ""and brings you narcotic foreversleep
through a needle..." This movement is music in words. "Nothing is as still
as a dead kitten." Painfully beautiful. "if nature was beneath your paws
instead of plastic." This possesses the visual echoes of Ted Hughe"
Posted by Unknown on "her name was cinders" by purr_verse
- "Unnerving. Seems like one of those things that no one would ever want to think about, let alone write. Sick and brilliant. +T.P.U+"
Posted by Unknown on "her name was cinders" by purr_verse
- "Oh my this was pull no punches night it looks like. Very cut throat "he carries you to the surgery
gently
and brings you narcotic foreversleep" Especially dug those lines. Heh cool. -Ship"
Posted by Unknown on "her name was cinders" by purr_verse
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