Comments by All Members

"A lot of emotion here. It makes it a great write. Thanks, JD"
Posted by Just Dave on "Taste this Bitterness with all your Heart" by lenores_death

"...maintain your beliefs. in brevity, a light shines..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Scattered" by lenores_death

"nice! I've had a few relationships on this path, this week as a matter of fact."
Posted by georgelstein on "Cause and Effect" by lenores_death

"This has surprisingly great rhythm, I really enjoyed it and the meaning that was interpreted."
Posted by Unknown on "Cause and Effect" by lenores_death

"Dreadful.To offer no resolution.Suffering is clear."
Posted by Ortolan on "Cause and Effect" by lenores_death

"Pain...it is simple enough, but the human mind can draw out the torment long after the visible injury is healed.Some do seek to find who is responsible...but what if you were God, awful to say that anyone could hurt themselves that much, it would be unbearable.Can't help but reflect though, after all the god troubles I've been through.Makes me think it all to death,despite my supposed conclusions."
Posted by Ortolan on "Scattered" by lenores_death

"...nice write. a few moments of clarity, an infrequent oasis in a desert of misery... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "Whiplash" by lenores_death

"Love this to death. "hemlock and opium" stuck in my head like some twisted Sherlock and Watson.."
Posted by Unknown on "angel o' mine" by lenores_death

"Sounds like either inner demons, or problems presenting themselves as solutions. I noticed an almost metrical sound in the first stanza, almost classical in that regard. I can see you as a very capable poet, should you remain here, ever growing."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Ask Me a Question, and they'll tell you Lies" by lenores_death

"...a mournful little poem, told in plain language..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Taste this Bitterness with all your Heart" by lenores_death

"Those butterflies are flying impaired and the wrists are off limits as a landing zone when the razor wispers, cheers and welcome to DP!"
Posted by dwells on "Every Scar Tells a Story" by lenores_death

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