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- ""Because our time are breathing on each other's lips." That part made me gasp. As, nett said, I feel as this is makeup'd feeling. Like a smile that's pretend. And I'm sorry that you feel that way, I truly am. "
Posted by Star on "Mon Coeur" by Strataic
- "I really like how this appears to be written in broken thoughts, yet underlining emphasis on a genetic makeup. I'm sure each person will draw a different conclusion of this piece, but in the end come up with the same conclusion. There are no words to describe how gifted you really are, and not from a musing standpoint either. Great piece it has left strong impressions within my mind. .hugs. "
Posted by soul_versing on "Mon Coeur" by Strataic
- "Mysterious expression that I cannot explain how I understand. But I do. Yes. Just...yes. Always intriguing, you, but this is truly amazing. Each note perfectly-placed. You make this look easy. "
Posted by Unknown on "Our Skin It Sighs" by Strataic
- "I thought of becoming something you are not in order to be understood or communicate ... almost like a reverse metamorphosis ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "The Unreadable Poem" by Strataic
- "Finally. This is just beautiful even though I will have to keep coming back to it and ponder on it some more. But it is interesting enough to make me want to do that. Your writing always is... fish--mmm¿"
Posted by Cantara on "The Unreadable Poem" by Strataic
- "I live in a mental health half-way house, and last night Mr. Style asked me something about acorns, lol. I love your poems, and seeing you in Cerebro. LOL just kidding bruh."
Posted by Unknown on "Cotton-Acre Acorn" by Strataic
- "those consciences are one hell of a thing. eating down your shoulders so much. we find people in the wild where we can be ourselves and be free of those burdens. oh, the imagery is so beautiful in this. please, please keep writing. (: "
Posted by Star on "Cotton-Acre Acorn" by Strataic
- "i also really appreciate the concussive rhythm of this. such a great attention to each tree without losing sight of the forest, if you will. :P really awesome, bro."
Posted by Unknown on "Cotton-Acre Acorn" by Strataic
- "consciences are a heavy burden to bear, as are the transgressions of our individual pasts... but with acknowledgment sometimes we also find acceptance... which can be a beautiful thing indeed. seeping scars and land sharks. i love the visceral veracity of this, the cutthroat imagery, and also the alliteration. ;) swell piece, lukemeister.
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Posted by Unknown on "Cotton-Acre Acorn" by Strataic
- "The poets mind is clockwork and quite a strange design really. I say/wrote this because... you stripped the ugliness out of a horrid landscape, and then rewritten it in such a way that it steals my very breath from my beating heart. I cannot believe that I haven't taken the time to read you until now, my apologies. I feel in love with this piece... very beautiful work, sir. Bows-"
Posted by soul_versing on "Slumber" by Strataic
- "I love your melding of the botanical and physical , the parallels that synch and mesh and the interconnectedness of it all that manifests such clarity of emotion..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "My Ryeglass" by Strataic
- "Very simple work that forced me to analyze the depth of your word choice. It left me with a sense of anguish or despair. Very well done."
Posted by BloodyMercy on "My Ryeglass" by Strataic
- "You need no apostrophes but one, Dear. You core down into the depths of me with this one...perhaps i was a tree, once. They took my trees away several times...seems everywhere i go they do so. The nails were broken, the arms and legs pulsing with white blood...each one i lost dug a hole inside me. i know that feeling, and the feeling of being returned to One within the tree. *sigh* "
Posted by Unknown on "Tree Of Corpse's" by Strataic
- "Nehema has my favourite down there. "Whilst many comprehend...Evolution..We drink tea". Profound once more. i long to try collaboration but it is slow going. Your style is slow. It is graceful, like many tentacles gliding through water to an unknown end...and even then there may be none...:)"
Posted by Unknown on "Incidental (Feat. Symbol)" by Strataic
- "Mmmm...this is lovely. "While we hurt/ ...Together.../you still entice/Others towards light/in fallen towers" oh man..that's bliss right there. It could be a poem all its own. Forgive me for not coming sooner, a Brother bade me here and i am glad for it. You are strange, off~world. Enchanting. "
Posted by Unknown on "Too Few Words" by Strataic
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