Comments by All Members
- "What an amazing ryhme...I want to write like this...*pouts in jealousy, then hugs storm* Good job, Storm...Now you hafta write more often...~Mikey"
Posted by BleedSilver on "Closed Door" by Storm
- "Helplessness, and yet you know there should be something, anything you can do about it...This breeds terror indeed..."
Posted by Solace on "Closed Door" by Storm
- "i refer to those events that you wish were different, you ask why me? why you...there is no reason, there doesnt have to be and that is the frustration right there. Senselessness inane fury!"
Posted by Solace on "Closed Door" by Storm
- "Stand then falls... Gives a feeling of complete frustration and the urge to scream is relentless, a mixture of mindlessness amongst that despise of events"
Posted by Solace on "Closed Door" by Storm
- "i agree with demon.*wordless terror.this was short and to the point.very blunt but i thoroughly enjoyed reading.nice write.-knight"
Posted by knightmirror on "Closed Door" by Storm
- "personal hell... i like it storm. simple, straightforward, powerful. "Sickening Mass
Of Self-Doubt" -- the point where the feeling hit me."
Posted by Daemonicus on "Closed Door" by Storm
- "oooo this was really cool. i like it a lot like it told a story and had a great last stanza. nice job ~finaldestiny~"
Posted by finaldestiny on "Lullaby" by Storm
- "i love.... this piece is just so truth telling that it is well deserving of its title... great write...~hopeless"
Posted by hopeless on "Lullaby" by Storm
- "wow, nice one, this really makes sence, lol, i wish i had this bit of wisdom when i was younger.~~~Grave"
Posted by WinterGrave on "Lullaby" by Storm
- "Awww, there is a saying "tis better to have loved" u know the rest...It stands to reason that being alone breeds loneliness, love breeds happiness and belonging. Jag älskar dig"
Posted by Solace on "Lullaby" by Storm
- "Everything you need to know when your young but dont figure it out until you go through it, only it cant be put better any other way, intresting stuff
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Posted by Unknown on "Lullaby" by Storm
- "lol... you figured out my only purpose with this one =P"
Posted by Storm on "Lullaby" by Storm
- "if i sang this to a kid they would probably cry and beat me with a stick..."
Posted by Twilight on "Lullaby" by Storm
- "the ending was very sad indeed. a powerful piece with a powerful close."
Posted by Twilight on "Lullaby" by Storm
- "So sad, and so true. Portrays the feeling that we need to wrap children up in cotton wool extremely well. Beautiful work. ~L"
Posted by Lynaes on "Lullaby" by Storm
- "interesting lullaby... Like "wish upon a star" said it is like guidance and protection from darker things... also seems to be guiding someone away from being used and hurt by others in this cruel world we live it... Good write! *Jess*"
Posted by Unknown on "Lullaby" by Storm
- "Like guidance and protection from darker things.. Lovely overall feeling to it. ~Wish Upon A Star"
Posted by Unknown on "Lullaby" by Storm
- ""At least then I knew What it was that hurt so much", those lines I can relate to very much. This whole piece is an excellent, vivid description. ~L"
Posted by Lynaes on "Pain Excused" by Storm
- "I've never understood why people cut themselves but someone once told me that it was better than everything else. This poem was fantastic and gave me a new view-point. Great job. "
Posted by Unknown on "Pain Excused" by Storm
- "solace summed it up pretty well so i wont touch it... its good its very good... ~hopeless"
Posted by hopeless on "Pain Excused" by Storm
- "For a girl who writes english as a third language, you really do have a grasp and depth of its inner workings..."
Posted by Solace on "Storm" by Storm
- "I once wrote of the same thing, "I cut myself to make sure, make sure i'm still alive...I want to be dead, outside as well as in..." Pain hurts, the physical manifestation less so, find peace and solace in something, thought is both a gift and a curse, fi"
Posted by Solace on "Pain Excused" by Storm
- "Desensitised to everything, what became of subtlety... So once said a wise man indeed...To be numb is to hurt those that you love most, it is most often synonimous with regret. I should know :)"
Posted by Solace on "Blood View" by Storm
- ""With every breath you open up a wound
that will not heal" that says it all.
"
Posted by BoldSolitude on "Hate Me" by Storm
- ""an old soul taking a new form " I really liked that line and it was a fitting end. very well done"
Posted by BoldSolitude on "Storm" by Storm
- "beautiful transformation poem... empowering... "
Posted by Mr King on "Storm" by Storm
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