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- "Further on I’ll have to reread this. I see where you’re going and I just lost your direction towards the end. Stimulating for sure. "
Posted by sIo on "There is a way" by midnights voice
- "I'll never forget in the movie "Remo Williams..." Joel Gray did just that as a Korean sensei. Cheers MV and remember it's only a matter of surface tension - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Remember when ?" by midnights voice
- " This is almost perfect I was sucked in the first two stanzas and quite impressed however a bit farther down your fluidity threw me off but then the last stanza was perfect . Much better however thanI think I myself could do. "
Posted by sIo on "Bitters" by midnights voice
- "There is a pain that comes with opening up yourself. It's easy to stay hidden. It's safer, but that pain is temporary. Growing pains, if you will, and from that we can hopefully embrace who we are. Much respect for this. I needed to read something like this today. "
Posted by Drea on "There is a way" by midnights voice
- "But I did that already MV (and it fried all my circuits:)
This assumes we all have a soul; albeit a shrunken one, sadly. Cheers and well-said! - Dan. Le sigh - the world is too much with us, if we let it."
Posted by dwells on "There is a way" by midnights voice
- "I am guessing everyone no matter what age they are still has youth inside of them. Your poem really moves my heart. "
Posted by Arwen on "There is a way" by midnights voice
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