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  • "i love the way each line rolled off my tongue as i read aloud. the structure ws great, and the metaphors brought it to life. thanks for sharing, and welome to dp."
    Posted by natalie on "What We've Become" by Hands_Around_My_Throat
  • "well composed, sensual even as it strips the passion from itself.... exposing a naked surrender...by reducing lovers to trivialities... a becoming of miscreants, maybe. Well selected words, composed with care. Thank you."
    Posted by The Dybbuk on "What We've Become" by Hands_Around_My_Throat
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