Comments by All Members
- "Great job matching the tile to the body of work - not everyone succeeds at doing this. Very descriptive and if I may: put a space between every 4th line as you seem to write and rhyme in that classical form (whatever it is called). I know the editing is a lot of work on this website, good job overall and welcome!"
Posted by dwells on "Heartlessness" by kenneth
- "Hi Kenneth - the last line should rhyme I think? Otherwise technically perfect and very well-stated."
Posted by dwells on "Anvils beat" by kenneth
