Comments by All Members
- "There are some typos in there that you might want to correct, but the piece itself is quite powerful. The ending is strong...a declaration and a mantra at the same time. Welcome to Dark Poetry."
Posted by Amaryllis on "Inner Resolve" by Apsarra
- "yep... well said. "living just for dying... dying just for you" sabbath..... thanks for sharing and welcome to dp"
Posted by Unknown on "Introspective" by Apsarra
- "The thoughts of worthlessness are ever present in all of us I think. Though all of us are eventually going to die I find it best to live in the now. Good Write."
Posted by pureevil8 on "Introspective" by Apsarra