Comments by All Members
- "i feel the pain of loneliness and it seems reminescent of a rapunzel story. well written. enjoyable.thanks for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "To Watch" by Cindy-ydniC
- "a very refined perspective, eloquently expressed with sensibility and class... those windows... how they move and twist, colors morphing and swirling before our eyes... and yet they stand so still, so cold, and the world fades in the distance... the observant.... that which is merely observed by the watcher, the observer, and the quality of being watchful, patient.... peering closely... there is an existential tone and moment here, an alienation and solemn dull pain.... very well written. thank you and welcome to the valley, I thoroughly enjoyed this "
Posted by Unknown on "To Watch" by Cindy-ydniC
- "hmmm... such a unique perspective... to an ancient dolorous event... I felt the mother's pain, the guilt.... the self blame... torturous silence... such a far-reaching trauma... horrid."
Posted by Unknown on "rape" by Cindy-ydniC
- "A very well written poem. I have also never read or heard of another poem written about a polar bear. The plight of this individual polar bear was incredibly palpable in your piece. Excellent stuff."
Posted by carlosjackal on "The lonely polar bear" by Cindy-ydniC
- "wow I am truly touched by your comment, thank you so much for this. You really gave me a confidence boost because I was starting to doubt my own creativity."
Posted by Cindy-ydniC on "The lonely polar bear" by Cindy-ydniC
- "I've never read...or even seen a sole poem about a polar bear. The title drew me in and the poem was just....amgnificent, yet very c-c-c-cold. I really felt for the polar bears plight; I even wanted to go 'awwww'....yes, truly. This had a great kind of ecological view as well as an interesting insight into this polar bear's moment in time. Really impressive, solemn but well written effort....applause now!"
Posted by stryder on "The lonely polar bear" by Cindy-ydniC
