Comments by All Members
- "I don't think your a freak! And I love the last line! Too many people are quick to judge. Very Good Write!...WRITE MORE!...lol"
Posted by Rebel_Angel on "Freak" by Xavier
- "I like this too! So far I like all your works and I want to read more! I know exactally how you feel, I feel like this to at times (not fun!)..."
Posted by Rebel_Angel on "Darkness" by Xavier
- "I love this! And I so have to agree! I feel sometimes that no matter how hard you try things will never change, even if you want them too. This is the story of my life...lol"
Posted by Rebel_Angel on "Piece of Paper" by Xavier
- "WoW! lol I think this is good and I don't see why Morgue is gettin so pissed, so what u used 2 lines, sometimes we need insperation and listening to music is a great way to get it! Good Write by the way."
Posted by Rebel_Angel on "Insanity" by Xavier
- "great write. that saying goes for our entire group. see ya at school pal and dont forget the can. We need a good chicogo hack going."
Posted by The_Scavenger on "Freak" by Xavier
- "hehe..this used to happen to me...I just got used to it, and now I dont even notice anyone looking at me...because I'm not gonna change my style because some motherfuckers think I'm a weirdo..."
Posted by Crying_Banshee on "Freak" by Xavier
- "I think you're a freak, if I knew you, I could say I know! Or not."
Posted by Six-Out on "Freak" by Xavier
- "i understand this write very much ive gone thro it... but i like being the freak in the story."
Posted by eternal despair on "Freak" by Xavier
- "Heh...i like that last line..."so just think the way I think to truly see me"...that's nice line...did you decorate that line yourself?"
Posted by Unknown on "Freak" by Xavier
- "Not only did you copy the lines, but you copied the tone and the idea of the song. Sure, only two lines are DIRECTLY copied... but you also write about memory, etc. FYI, stealing ideas is also plagiarism."
Posted by morgue_white on "Insanity" by Xavier
- "I'm going to say that if you copy more than 5 words or oterhwise clearly copy part of a previous work, what you're doing legally falls under plagiarism."
Posted by morgue_white on "Insanity" by Xavier
- "Floats on down the street till the wind is gone
The memory now is like the picture was then
When the paper's crumpled up it can't be perfect again
Chorus
Bridge
Now you got me caught in the act
You bring the thought back
I'm telling you that
I"
Posted by morgue_white on "Insanity" by Xavier
- "Moving all around
Screaming of the ups and downs
Pollution manifested in perpetual sound
The wheels go round and the sunset creeps behind
Street lamps, chain-link, and concrete
A little piece of paper with a picture drawn
"
Posted by morgue_white on "Insanity" by Xavier
- "Chorus
Bridge:
In the memory you will find me
Eyes burning up
The darkness holding me tightly
Until the sun rises up
"
Posted by morgue_white on "Insanity" by Xavier
- "Then with the eyes shut looking through the rust and rotten dust
A small spot of light floods the floor
And pours over the rusted world of pretend
The eyes ease open and its dark again"
Posted by morgue_white on "Insanity" by Xavier
- "There's a place so dark you can't see the end
(Skies cock back) and shock that which can't defend
The rain then sends dripping acidic questions
Forcefully, the power of suggestion
"
Posted by morgue_white on "Insanity" by Xavier
- "Guess what I only use the fist two lines from Linkin Park.
Ever thing else is mine if you would read Linkin Parks Lyrics you would find that out.
So what are you going to say about that!
"
Posted by Xavier on "Insanity" by Xavier
- "Here are the lyrics to the song:
From the top to the bottom
Bottom to top I stop
At the core I've forgotten
In the middle of my thoughts
Taken far from my safety
The picture is there
The memory won't escape me
But why should I care (2x)"
Posted by morgue_white on "Insanity" by Xavier
- "hmmm if u like i will come shead light on u, yeah spellcould be worked but i cant spell either so its no bigie to me because i understood it. nice job on this"
Posted by Aurora_Light on "Darkness" by Xavier
- "oh my umm it seems morgue isnt happy w/ u at all, not bad i never really listened to that song so i cant say i recogize it but if u took more then a few lines from it not good but other then that not bad"
Posted by Aurora_Light on "Insanity" by Xavier
- "For some reason that reminded me of 'The Four Horsemen' by Metallica! Good but you should work on your spelling though"
Posted by Unknown on "Darkness" by Xavier
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