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- "how about we play with the sun's shadows...after all we are capable of flying...of not touching ground...let's expand...and sometimes wrong is necessary...no matter where you are...see you there..."
Posted by DarkBlueClearWater on "Counterintuitive" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "I got a sense of Winter...and a reminder of Spring...and a feeling like perhaps you are trying to convince someone who likes to fly free...that being grounded for a while is not such a bad thing...(if you're in the right place)... "
Posted by kinkifrog on "Counterintuitive" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "Hmmm...I wondered if the bookend would work...it's hard to conceive of these things with just a pen and paper...
i also like your elipses...but I should tell you I stopped at the lips..."
Posted by Crush_With_Eyeliner on "Redhead" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "I got the impression that ground flight could be entirely right somewhere in the cycle... a where that seems more like a when, maybe..... as the shadows bend around the globe, perhaps. pensive read, indeed."
Posted by Unknown on "Counterintuitive" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "I like the way the red is book-ended... as if the center, the core of this is consumed by the sight of her..... red, red... red........head....lips......"
Posted by Unknown on "Redhead" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "That was beautiful, It was complex but clear and left lovely images in my head with a crushing sadness as an afterthought. That is what i get from the piece."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Traumfeiern" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "there are moments...that seem ethereally based and miraculous; fleeting and floating. every and no thing but immediate.. .. .. i love the strange word sounds of the title and the [in my mind] magdalene effect they create for me.....creation of life from the center of a body's being. "
Posted by Unknown on "Miracle Navel" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "okay so this is gonna sound like the weirdest comment ever, but i've read this several times now, trying to figure it out and i keep imagining a quickie. am i way off...again?"
Posted by Unknown on "Miracle Navel" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "Then I shall consider my goal accomplished. I know we've spoken about this before...I came across a great quote from Hermann Hesse..I've been immersed in his books (again) for about a month now..
This is from the introduction to Steppenwolf..
"Poetic writing can be understood and misunderstood in many ways. In most cases the author is not the right authority to decide on where the reader ceases to understand and the misunderstanding begins. Many an author has found readers to whom his work seemed more lucid than it was to himself. Moreover, misunderstandings can be fruitful under certain circumstances." I read that earlier tonight and immediately thought about you. I take great comfort in the fact that this experience was meaningful to you, whether it be on an intellectual or emotional level. "
Posted by Crush_With_Eyeliner on "an offer, declined" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "......an ending that is bludgeoning....egads....as a thing unravels, unveils, it then becomes transparent, wounds exposed and viscerally seen; weak spots, soft bruises, and deadly spot on coup.de.gras.. ... this feels more remorseful than anything; .....i like how you concisely expound on the entire expanse of a thoughtful moment. and egads again, killer end."
Posted by Unknown on "an offer, declined" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
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